Doorways - Short Story
Doorways
Immediately, I run to the bookcase to look at the books on the shelves. But, since I’m really clumsy, and trip over things even when there is nothing to trip over, I fall, and try to grab onto the bookshelf for support. Instead of doing so, I grab a book and pull. The last thing I expected was the book to stop me from falling. Slowly, I looked up to see that the book was slanted at an angle, but when I looked around the room... there seemed to be a door in the wall, the perfect size for me to walk through. I could see light at the end of the room. Carefully, cautiously, I creeped towards the door, even though I felt like cowering under the blankets. “Emily! It’s dinnertime! Come down and eat please!” I jumped up in shock. “Coming Mum!” I shouted down the stairs. I couldn't risk anybody seeing the secret passage, so I pushed the book back into the shelf, and the hole closed.
That night, I dreamt about a dark doorway, and imagined what mysteries could be lurking on the other side. And so, I woke up the next morning forcing myself to find out what's behind the hole. I quickly ran downstairs,and poured some milk and cereal into my bowl, and started to shove the food into my mouth. My parents were already downstairs, sipping their coffee. My dad gave me a perplexed look. “Why you eating so fast honey? Do you have something to do?” He asks. “Yah Dad, I gotta catch up on those books.” I replied. He smiled at me a knowingly, and I sprinted up the stairs, back to my room. Scanning the bookshelf, I remembered pulling out a black leather book, with the word Doorways written on the spine. I located it, and pulled on it. It stood stuck at an angle again, and I turned around to see the door had magically appeared in the wall. My heart was beating, and I could hear it thundering in my chest, as I creeped towards it. Slowly, I walked inside the doorway. It was completely dark. I felt the walls for a light, but the second I turned it on, I heard a thud. The door had closed behind me. I couldn’t take it anymore. I collapsed on the floor, but before I blacked out, I prayed that I wouldn't die.
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DeleteWatch your tenses...are you in the past? then stay there...or are you in the present? then stay there throughout the entire story...keep revising ..good for you!
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